Saturday, September 28, 2013

Making Lemonade

Like any other author on the face of the earth, I've had my share of disappointing reviews.  When I first started writing five years ago, I'll be honest--they hurt. Now five years later, I'm thick skinned and realize not everyone is going to like the story or the characters.  I try my best not to focus on those readers who one-star me.  Instead, I focus on the readers who enjoy my work. Nevertheless, when I wrote The Price of Love a wonderful thing happened.  I took the criticism from negative comments from the first two books and used them to craft book three.

The Legacy Series has had its share of complaints.  Here are some of them:
  • Suzette is a weak woman and irritating.
  • Robert Holland was so sweet in book one, but he's a selfish manipulator in book two.
  • How could any woman leave her newborn baby and just run off with another man?
  • Poor kind Philippe sure got the short-end of the stick in book two. 
  • I've never met so many irritating characters.
  • The ending sucked.  This is life and then you die.
  • What a depressing story.
Well, you get the drift.  So what did I do for The Price of Love?  I took all those criticisms and used them to plot book three.  With that in mind, here are some questions you might ask yourself in anticipation of the coming story:
  • Will Suzette mature and be a stronger woman?
  • Will Robert Holland feel any remorse for his past and how he stole another man's wife?
  • Will Suzette carry grief for 18 years over the loss of her baby?
  • Will Philippe ever recover, forgive, and find happiness?
  • Will Vicki develop any more irritating characters?  (Of course, I will!  You know me.)
  • Will this book have a happy ending or should I expect to throw it against the wall after the last page?
  • Will you write book four?  Surely, it can't end here!   
The points above are just a few short examples of the inspiration for The Price of Love.  I took the lemon comments and made lemonade, and frankly it turned out pretty sweet.  Actually, they were all valid points that helped me continue the story to redeem a lot of negative qualities in the characters. 

In closing, I should let you know that I do consider constructive criticism (emphasis on constructive). Though I've never felt the need to rewrite any of the first two books to make a minority happy, I intend to keep them as they are for the majority of readers who enjoy them. If I crafted the book the way each individual reader would like to have seen the story play out, I would have hundreds of versions.

It will be very interesting to read the reactions to the third book in The Legacy Series.  No doubt, you'll think the main character is too strong-willed, irritating, judgmental, and a stuck-up snob.  If you are smart, you'll pick up the innuendos in the story that will lead to number four in the series where she will learn more of life's lessons and pay her own price.  When people tell me that they don't like my characters, I often don't look at it as a failure.  If my characters move you to love or hate them, then in my mind I've done my work and they are alive enough to cause a reaction.

I also realize that some of you may have very high expectations for book three and could be disappointed in the story.  It was a difficult write, and I felt a lot of pressure and expectation penning it.  The end result is what it is, and I understand that it may not be what some people expected but may be likeable by others.  That is the territory that goes with being an author.  

Editing continues.  October 7th approaches.  If the world doesn't end before then, The Price of Love will soon be out.  In the meantime, I'm going to start dabbling in writing number four.

Hang in there,

Friday, September 13, 2013

Updated Version of The Price of Deception

Hopefully, this coming weekend, I will be able to finish upgrading The Price of Deception to take care of some glaring problems that have been reported to me by my readers in the United Kingdom via reviews on Amazon. It will correct the verbal address of duke and duchess to Your Grace and other references as needed. I apologize for those oversights on my part. (Yes, I'm American, but with my extensive English ancestry, I should have known better.) The Price of Love does contain the correct form of address. 

Amazon should automatically push the updated version to everyone's Kindle. I will contact them and make sure that happens. 

Next on my list will be The Price of Innocence. I'll go through the text and make any necessary updates. 

The Price of Love is currently at my editor and with three beta readers. Things are progressing, and I should be able to make the early October release. Thanks for your patience! 

After all is said and done, I probably will continue to Book #4, The Price of Passion. I'll make the final decision after Book #3's release. Frankly, even after 95,000 words continuing the family saga, it still isn't complete. I have too many unresolved love interests.

Have a great weekend dear friends and readers! As always, thank you for your support.

Fondly, 
Vicki

Tuesday, September 10, 2013

Out to Editor & Beta Readers

I finished my end of the work on Saturday, September 7, and sent the book to my editor extraordinaire and three beta readers.  Four pairs of eyes are now reading it and seeing the things I can no longer pick up after reading it twenty times myself.

After it went out the door, I sighed.  I am exhausted.  The next three weeks it's out of my hands in the hands of others.  When it comes back, I'll do the final editing and hopefully have it up the first week in October for Kindle sale.

It's coming.

Vicki

Friday, September 6, 2013

Tease Time

I'm in editing hell.  Nevertheless, I can at least take a break and share with you the subheadings to the chapters.  Let your imagination go wild!  

Prologue - Confession is Good for the Soul
Chapter 1    - A Buried Past   
Chapter 2    - No Patience and Deja Vu   
Chapter 3    - Like Father Like Son   
Chapter 4    - A Blessing or Thorn   
Chapter 5    - Right or Left
Chapter 6    - Convergence of Strangers
Chapter 7    - Season of Matchmaking
Chapter 8    - Prudent Caution
Chapter 9    - What is Truth?
Chapter 10  - More Than Tea and Coffee
Chapter 11  - Thwarted Plans
Chapter 12  - The Power of the Tongue
Chapter 13  - Tea for Five
Chapter 14  - Off With Your Head!
Chapter 15  - An Invitation
Chapter 16  - Brandy, Cigars and Secrets
Chapter 17  - Winner Takes All
Chapter 18  - The City of Light and Love
Chapter 19  - Family Heirlooms
Chapter 20  - A Graveyard of Bones
Chapter 21  - A Forgotten Man
Chapter 22  - A Smoke Screen
Chapter 23  - The Pleasures of the Flesh
Chapter 24  - A Sibling Tussle
Chapter 25  - An Emotional Guillotine   
Chapter 26  - No Time to Spare
Chapter 27  - The Day of Reckoning
Chapter 28  - The Aftermath of Truth
Chapter 29  - Intentional Harm
Chapter 30  - A Fork in the Road
Chapter 31  - A Final Pardon
Chapter 32  - Season of Change
Chapter 33  - Parting is Such Sweet Sorrow

Saturday, August 31, 2013

Another Update on The Price of Love

This morning I drove to Office Depot and had the book printed off (340 pages) for a grand total of $26.91.  Geesh!  That was expensive. My Epson printer at home would have gone through two ink cartridges, no doubt, costing me $48.  I guess I saved a few bucks.

To top it off, I had no highlighters around, so I went tromping off to look for one highlighter. How hard could that be since all the school supplies are out?  Purchasing one highlighter is an impossibility at this time of the year. They are bundled up for school in multi-highlighter packages. I ended up with a six-pack for $5.99.  Highway robbery.  Why can't I just buy one for a buck?  Well, I suppose I could look at this way, I have six highlighters I can use on six more books.

Next week, I'll be reading through the text on the printed page. I've stared too long at the book in MS Word format on a computer screen and can no longer see my typos.  There is something about looking at it in print that gives you another view.

Things are progressing, though I have this feeling it's not going fast enough.  October 1st is still my deadline for release of the eBook.  Print will come later, because I need to reformat it entirely and design the interior and back cover.

When I get bored, I keep fooling around with the cover.  Yes, I know I have one already, but I'm a Photoshop junkie of the worse kind.  I downloaded a new font today that's really curly-swirly.  I'm like a kid playing with a new toy.  I've even got stand-by covers that are totally different, too.  

Well, back to work!  I have five more chapters to run through Grammarly, and then I'm reading and holding in my hand six brand new multi-colored highlighters as I read 340 pages.  

Pray for me.

Fondly,
Vicki


Sunday, August 25, 2013

Komtesse Angelique Jolene von Lamberg


As an author, I've been accused of writing characters that irritate people. Reviewers are probably right.  I think it is quite obvious, from those who have read my books, that I do not sugar coat reality or emotions when I create stories.  

My characters are created with both good and bad qualities for a purpose.  It sets the theme of the book, gives them conflict and challenges to face, and ends with resolutions that often border on forgiveness, restoration, or love. I'm not the cookie-cutter romance author.  It's the reason I remain an independent author, so I can step away from the expectations of agents and publishers as to what is acceptable and create something unique.

The Price of Love is no exception.

Let me preface this post by letting my readers know ahead of time that there is no romance in this book.  Zero. Zip. Nada. Nothing. There is one stolen kiss in a scene and that's it.  The temptation to fall in love exists. The book will be categorized as family saga/general fiction.  Is there any love in it?  Yes, but a different kind.  It's the love of family. 

As I read through the text again for the third time, I think readers will find some enduring qualities about Angelique and also some irksome qualities that ruffle feathers.  Listen folks, no one is perfect.  Neither are the people I create.  She is on a journey in this book to discover her heritage.  For the past eighteen years she has been reared by an Austrian count and instilled with morals, rigid views, and responsibility.  She is confident, unyielding, judgmental, and opinionated (almost like her biological father she doesn't know). Angelique (who goes by the name of Jolene throughout the book) does have endearing qualities, too, which may not always be evident until the final chapters of the story.

The Duke, Suzette, and their son Robert will also come back, along with Marguerite (the Duke's sister, her husband and son).  They are really secondary characters in this story, as it heavily relies on Jolene who drives the entire novel to its conclusion.

I have this urge to take off the book's cover Legacy's Conclusion, because the ending is a doorway into another story that could turn into romance for one of three people.  Why do I think this family saga will continue?  Perhaps it's because my imaginary characters are poking at me while I work on book three.  I'm not promising anything, but it's a possibility.

Well, back to editing.  It's coming.  Eventually.

All my best,
Vicki